Pitch Feedback sheet

Feedback from Pitch

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is the feedback sheet that we got after we presented our pitch. As you can see on the feedback sheet that our pitch did not display the narrative of our title sequence and the whole film very well so we will have to work on it and make it clear and understandable fro our audience by adding more information about the narrative. They said it doesn't link with the genre so we will have to find a way to link it to our genre and we are going to do this by adding codes and convenctions of thriller genre.

so that the audience can link the idea to the genre better.

One thing that w did do well is the casting as people agreed that the casting would be suitable to the roles and film and would attract an audience due to their star power and previous films that are similar.