Journal 3

We had to present our first draft of our title sequence to everyone in class. Our teacher didn't like the fact that the day was sunny as it reflected on our title sequence and they said it didn't look creepy and as its suppose to be and they also didn't like the road signs and cars as it didn't make sense and the narrative wasn't clear. we had make improvements to our title sequence so we decided to re-shoot the whole scene of the main protagonist opening the box and walking in the attic. We also decided to cut the whole scene to meeting the detective as well.